Editing Anansi e anjame de san xe men

Good work with this translation! It's a good story too. Still, there are some things I wonder about:

* ''suxife'' I don't find in the dictionary. It feels like it should be 'sufficient(ly)', and if so I think ''bas di'' could be good. Or should it be, what's the English word, 'content, satisfied'? Aha, yes, I found it now, small spelling error. 🙂 I'll fix that (sukife). Also, I think ''sukife di'' is like "please (as a process) ADJ", so pleasingly or satisfyingly, but we want a passive, I think – satisfi**ed** – so I think we should have ''be sukife.''

* ''fa'' is often skipped with verbs when meaning is clear (and I'm uncertain, the dict has that for many verbs, but then I've heard ''ya VERB'' should be used when clarity is needed?), and I think ''da ding truke'' works without it, so I change to that. 🙂 ''e fa ding'' might need ''fa'' or some other clarification, ''vol fa pos'' I don't know which. 🥴

* The text has plural marker ''men'' after the nouns, I used to put the old one before and do that with ''men'' too. Other modifiers comes before the modified words. But still, I don't know which is right, or if both are right? (Which could affect ''da men,'' if 'unmerged' men should go before the word it modifies, but I just don't know 🤷‍♂️).

doste di, [[User:Eiri|Eiri]] ([[User talk:Eiri|talk]]) 02:45, 17 April 2023 (EEST)

:Oh, and ''barxa be xuru e san xe be jame hata di max for,'' is that "rain starts and knowledge spread even further"? I think 'spread' there is not passive, or is it? Maybe I'm wrong, like.. it's a verb referring to something happening to the subject (the knowledge in this case). I think it should be ''anjame,'' anyhow?

:doste di, [[User:Eiri|Eiri]] ([[User talk:Eiri|talk]]) 02:53, 17 April 2023 (EEST)